Write an analytical paper rough draft and there were a lot of errors that need to be fixed.

Write an analytical paper rough draft and there were a lot of errors that need to be fixed. I will be providing the the outline, thesis, and rough draft so that you can reference it for the final draft. I will also be pasting the errors that were done on the rough draft that need to be fixed for this final draft. The rough draft was a page long, but this final analytical paper needs to be 4 pages long. This is the text that I am using for this assignment, please be sure to mention what text is being used while writing this essay. https://americanenglish.state.gov/files/ae/resource_files/the_tell-tale_heart_0.pdf. Let me know if you are able to open it.
Errors that need to be fixed:
You didn’t mention what story you chose. As mentioned previously, your thesis statement should be able to stand on its own and still make sense to any reader. It must mention both the full title and the full name of the author of your chosen text. Here is an example, “In “The Tell-Tale Heart”, Edgar Allen Poe illustrates how a person struggles with mental illness.” The restatement of your thesis in your conclusion will need to be revised as well. Some of your paragraphs need development. A well-developed paragraph should be at least five sentences.
The first sentence of your conclusion should be a restatement of your thesis.
You need at least one additional source to meet the minimum source requirement.
Incorrect margins.
Needs proofreading.